Thank you so much for your feedbackLooks good, you have a considerable talent for drawing. And of course the poly theme is a plus.
Hmmmm. Not sure exactly what you mean, but the idea was that the guy already had a wife, and after meeting his gf, they got married as well.Nice drawing, the proportions are right, I could see you doing more.
There's one thing that puzzles me, did you mean to write "You are his first wife, AFTER all" ?
That's my interpretation, but like Tinwen, I also assumed it should be "AFTER all". I've never seen "all" used by itself like that.Hmmmm. Not sure exactly what you mean, but the idea was that the guy already had a wife, and after meeting his gf, they got married as well.
In what sense? Doea it sound bad?That's my interpretation, but like Tinwen, I also assumed it should be "AFTER all". I've never seen "all" used by itself like that.
No, just odd. "After all" would make perfect sense in this context, but I can't tell what "all" is supposed to mean. But it might be a regional English usage I don't know about.In what sense? Doea it sound bad?
It sounds like broken English.In what sense? Doea it sound bad?
The OP's native language is not English. that's why they aren't familiar with appropriate usage of the expression "after all."No, just odd. "After all" would make perfect sense in this context, but I can't tell what "all" is supposed to mean. But it might be a regional English usage I don't know about.
I see. Neither is mine, so I wasn't sure if it was a regional thing haha.The OP's native language is not English. that's why they aren't familiar with appropriate usage of the expression "after all."
Yeah, sometimes the pronouns "all" and "everyone/everybody" are used interchangeably that way, but I don't think that was the intended meaning in this case.I see. Neither is mine, so I wasn't sure if it was a regional thing haha.
True that. My apologies for the confusionNo, just odd. "After all" would make perfect sense in this context, but I can't tell what "all" is supposed to mean. But it might be a regional English usage I don't know about.